Thursday, September 8, 2016

Week 6 blog post

today i will be showing you my color poem
I am blogging this because it is something colorful and bright

hope you enjoy!!!

Colour Poem

WALT to use descriptive language to help create an image (picture) in our reader's head

Success Criteria
  • Use adjectives to describe the noun
  • Use adverbs to describe the verb (describe how the action is happening)
  • Use a range of verbs to explain what is happening
  • Use a range of nouns that help us identify with a colour


Black is the Colour of…….

  • A wicked witch zooming dangerously from castle to castle in search of potions
  • A lazy cat waiting patiently by the roaring fire for its night-time feed
  • A  majestic panther stalking its prey tactfully through the dense forest
  • A piece of licorice inviting me to sneak it from the brightly coloured box

Red is the colour of ……..

  • Slippery lipstick running down my face
  • A bright red Ferrari zooming fast in the race
  • Blood running down my foot, puddling on the ground
  • A rotten strawberry smelling like cheese
  • The sweet juicy raspberry dripping  from my mouth as I bite into it
  • A juicy watermelon inviting me to chomp on it
  • The courageous vampire biting into a man’s fresh skin squirting blood

The color green is …

  • Grapes slippery slipping down my throat  
  • gras s is swish swish lining in the windy wind
  • Nail polish shining in the shiny sun
  • Seat covers sparkling in the sun
  • The preparing themselves for spring
  • Those are such pretty flats
  • Omg i'm in love with those gorgeous green sneakers
  • Who I really like that paper
  • Who those shoe laces really do stand out from the crowd
  • Who your hair looks really good on you
  • Silhouette for the brazil flag
  • That frog is so slippery slimy yuck

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